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  PUBLIC SAFETY WRITERS ASSOCIATION NEWSLETTER  
VOLUME VIII SUMMER 2008
 

Editor: Marilyn Meredith, mmeredith@ocsnet.net

This is your newsletter, please contribute articles, your news, book reviews, or anything else you think might be of interest.

IN THIS ISSUE:

MESSAGE FROM THE PRESIDENT
PSWA CONFERENCE
MEMBER ARTICLES AND TIPS
MEMBER BOOK REVIEWS
MEMBER NEWS

MESSAGE FROM THE PRESIDENT

Hope all of you are enjoying the beginnings of summer wherever you are and finding a lot of inspiration for your writing.  As our ever-growing list-serve is revealing, many of you are having great success.  Congratulations most recently to Sarah Cortez (see this newsletter for details). 

After much discussion, we've decided to keep the conference in Las Vegas at least another year.  Three factors led to this decision.  Everyone who filled out an evaluation at this year's conference expressed enthusiasm for the existing site and Keith has generously offered to coordinate the details for 2009.  Also, the uncertainty of what air fares may be next summer has made us believe that if anywhere will be economical to reach by air it will be Las Vegas as it depends so much on tourism.  As always, we are certainly open to other suggestions for conference location. 

As Marilyn Meredith has pointed out, many people plan their conference schedules at least a year in advance, so now wouldn't be too soon to be thinking of other options.  Speaking of the conference, Marilyn has also agreed to make arrangements for speakers, so be sure to let her know ASAP of any topics or speakers you think would be good choices.  Our goal has always to make the conference as affordable as possible and still break even, so take that into consideration.  Thanks to the hard work of everyone involved, our treasurer Nancy Farrar informs us that the conference this year cost us just over $8!  I'd say that close to break even is a terrific accomplishment!  We're all also pleased to announce that Michelle Perin-Callahan has agreed to organize the writing competition for the third year in a row.  At this point she is anxious to have feedback from all of you who have entered or are considering entering regarding categories you'd like to see included in the 2009 competition. 

This spring, AJ and Nancy Farrar and I spent a weekend creating a set of bylaws for the organization.  We're putting the finishing touches on that document and will be sending them to you soon for your approval.  As you will see, the bylaws create a formula for the election of officers and outline how major decisions will be made.  They also create several standing committees and we hope many of you will be available to participate in this way.  Meanwhile, as always if you have any questions about the organization, feel free to contact us (see the contact us button on this site for details).  Again, I hope your writing is going well and this you remember to keep your fellow members in mind if you ever need help, encouragement or just the chance to share ideas. 

--Marilyn Olsen, President

PSWA CONFERENCE

REPORT FROM A FIRST-TIMER

I wanted to again thank all of you for the wonderful time I had this year at the Public Safety Writers Conference. It really was a neat event with a great group of people. Many smart people. People who care about what's happening in the world around them. And that's what they're writing about. Stories or events that helped to shape their lives. Stories they wanted to now share with us. Short stories. And stories through poetry. And novels and non-fiction. And technical writing. It was all there. And everyone was meeting everyone, making all the right connections and taking the right seminars that will help to shape their futures as authors as well as the futures of the many readers who will meet their work along the way.

I hope everyone out there in the public safety field who writes or those who write about those in the public safety field will come out next year and share their life's experiences with us. Tell the stories from the perspective of caring eyes. And by all means enter the writing competition. That may even be the best part. Guys like me getting lucky and winning. And it means a lot to know that people who care, care about what you wrote. It felt terrific standing there and winning First Place for my novel Stolen Boy. I hope it's you who feels the joy next year. Because there's nothing quite like it.

 Peace and Blessings,

Michael Mehas

Stolen Boy: Voted "Book of The Year" and "Best in Fiction"
Author Media Kit: www.MichaelMehas.com
Stolen Boy Weblog: www.StolenBoy.com
Stolen Boy Video Trailer: http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&VideoID=22692469

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AND FROM ANOTHER FIRST TIMER--

I attended the PSWA conference for the first time and had a ball.  It's hard to be the 'new kid' and everyone was so kind and welcoming.  Thank you for all the encouragement and opportunity to network.  I wished I'd had even more one on one time.  Some folks really went out of their way to sit with me and I really appreciate it:  AJ, Tim, Marilyn O and Sarah, just to name a few.  I brought my 16 year old son me and he also had a good time.  We took advantage of the lovely weather and also The Strip, seeing "Spamalot" on one of our free evenings. 

The panel Marilyn M and I did spawned a ridiculous story to be created in this coming year and shared at the next conference--sorry, I mean a completely plausible murder plot involving a private dick who is also a Chippendale's "dancer" named, uh, Chip, and a whole host of suspects from the doggie doo collector down to the yoga instructor.  And the crime scene is in an abandoned meat-packing plant in Omaha. The victim is a judge on a national talent search like American Idol and it is... it goes... it seems... well, I suppose you'll have to see what the guilty do with those sparkling details...  Victoria Heckman

Victoria Heckman, Author of the K.O.'d in. . .
Hawaii mystery series From Pemberley Press  & Writer's Exchange
Kapu, A Coconut Man Mystery of Ancient Hawai'i
2008 from Seven Sisters Publishing
www.victoriaheckman.com

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A CONFERENCE WORTH WRITING ABOUT
by Sunny Frazier

This was only my second year at attending the PSWA conference, but I already feel like an “old timer.” It was good to see familiar faces again, to hear their career advances and new books coming out. I was excited to see Michelle again, who I dubbed “Flamingo” last year after Bugsy's girlfriend. I'm always curious to see her latest fashion statements. I missed Johnny Saunders, but I heard he was busy taking the sergeant's test in Delaware. 
           
New to the group is a good friend of mine, Victoria Heckman. She's my “sister” from the Central Coast Chapter of Sisters in Crime. I'll be seeing her later this month when I give my guerrilla writing workshop in San Luis Obispo.

Networking is one of the main reasons I joined PSWA. This time I'm pitching Michael Mehas, Denny Griffin and John Bellah as possible speakers to organizations in the Central Valley.
           
I got a chance to meet author Mary Montegue Sikes (Monti), whom I've mentioned in my Murder Circle. She's the author of “Eagle Rising,” published by Oak Tree Press. I'm very impressed by the quality of Oak Tree's books and Billie Johnson's commitment to her authors. We had a little private time together (okay, a stroll to the ladies room) and are staying in contact.
           
Sarah Cortez and I got a chance to share ideas and a bite of savory cheesecake while signing at Cheesecake and Crime in Henderson. I loved that bookstore and I'm spreading the word to other mystery authors. There are fewer and fewer small bookstores devoted to the mystery genre and they need our support.
           
My sister, Cathy, financed my trip. She said she loved putting faces to all the people I talk about, and she's excited to see you all again next year. So Keith, work your magic and bring us altogether in Vegas in '09.       

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ANOTHER CONFERENCE REPORT

I’m a con junkie. Well, maybe not quite that bad, but since September of ‘07, I’ve been to Alaska for Left Coast Crime, Chicago for Luv is Murder, and  Portland for Epicon. April was the Public Safety Writers Association’s conference and I just returned from Omaha and Mayhem in the Midlands.

Every con has a unique personality, but PSWA’s conference is definitely the friendliest. Now who’d expect hanging out with a bunch of law enforcement folks, retired and active would be so much fun? PSWA isn’t limited to people connected to law enforcement—but what we all have in common is a love for writing.

This year we had a panel on writing for technical magazines, an enlightening and fun demonstration of what makes a good cover from Sunny Frazier, a different way of developing characters, two publishers who told us what they look for in books from completely different perspectives, Victoria Heckman and I, along with the attendees, planned a mystery—and it was hilarious (see above), Tim Dees revealed some computer secrets, Mary Sikes gave us some invaluable tips on promotion, and much, much more.
A group of us traveled to Henderson and had a signing in the beautiful new Cheesecake and Crime bookstore—and some of us sampled the cheesecake.

Exciting plans are already in the works for next year’s conference. As we finalize the date and time, more information will be forthcoming.

--Marilyn Meredith, http://fictionforyou.com

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MEMBER ARTICLES

Sarah Cortez Announces New Project “Cop Stories USA”

Each one of you who is a current cop or an ex-cop is eligible to contribute a written piece to “Cop Stories USA.”  Write about something in policing that means something to you – the case you can’t forget, the car share you hate, your memory of going solo for the first time.  Or, write about the ‘bigger issues” you’ve thought about through the years – justice, retribution, crime, the prison system.

In this book we will tell America who we are, what we do, and how we see ourselves.  This book will be an anthology of the writing of street cops, jailers, game wardens, military cops, school cops, state or federal agents, and will present different perspectives about policing – how we each do it, and how we each see it.  My goal is a book of true life experiences with the authors’ own reflections about the experiences – all written by those of us who police across America.

Even if you don’t think of yourself as a writer, fire up your laptop. I will edit this collection of law enforcement experiences, thoughts, and reflections about policing, and I’m willing to help you revise your writing.  I recently spent several years helping more than thirty previously unpublished writers revise their memoir pieces for an anthology entitled “Windows into My World: Latino Youth Write Their Lives” published barely a year ago.  This book has already won a national award and several of its authors are talking with major publishers about book contracts.  I bring the same editorial eye to this project.

Please email me at copstoriesusa@gmail.com for further information, deadlines, etc.  I can email you the Request for Submissions with all the pertinent details, or answer any other questions.  Please tell other cops or retired cops about the project.  Be advised that all of the pieces in this new book must be previously unpublished.

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HERE COMES THE JUDGE!

By Sunny Frazier

It felt good to leave the conference with two short story awards in my hands. However, when I returned home, there were 24 stories waiting for me. Suddenly, I was no longer a contender. I was a judge.

I'm going to have to give Michelle and Marilyn M. credit. Judging a contest is no easy feat. I had 12 points to rate, from formatting to theme. In addition, there was a section for comments. When I teach, I'm pretty demanding. I knew I'd have to be careful my tough love didn't ruin a budding career.

The process was taxing. I had my personal preferences in writing styles and genre, but they were set aside. What I love about writing I looked for in the stories: good word choices, interesting sentence structure, out-of-the-box thinking. Plot takes second place to well-developed characters. I especially sought out that elusive element called “Voice.”
           
Although there were only two dozen stories, the process took a week and a half. I had to walk away and clear my mind after each evaluation, much like cleaning the palate in wine tasting. I second-guessed my opinions and struggled to find the right words to convey to the writer where they missed the mark. At the same time I kept asking myself, “Who am I to judge?”
           
It's hard not to critique others without reflecting on one's own weaknesses and strengths in writing. It's easy to dismiss a badly written story until you have to explain the flaws. I also had to remind myself there was a sensitive writer behind each submission and this was their best effort. I had to be gentle, but firm.
           
I hope I made the contest a positive learning experience for the entrants. I know it was a revelation for the judge. 
           
P.S.  I was thinking it would be fun to have a name for the PSWA Awards. There are the Derringers, the Macavity, the Anthony, the Lefties, the Shamus and the Agatha in the mystery writing genre. How about the Dragnet, the Friday, the Hammett, the Wambaugh (maybe he'll come to our conference!)? Just something to think about before next year.      

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The Vegas Comedown

There’s something magical about being in Vegas with the PSWA crowd, strutting through a hotel/casino the caliber of the Suncoast, rubbing shoulders with high-rollers, and dining “high on the hog” as we would say here in Illinois.

Marilyn Meredith did a great job with the speakers and workshops…I especially loved the “brainstorming to start your novel” one…clearly there are some very creative minds in the PSWA group, even if some were a touch on the perverse side! I posted a batch of pics on the Oak Tree website…here’s the link, if you want to have a look: http://www.oaktreebooks.com/PSWA%202008.htm

But all good things must end, and eventually I found myself back at home base, surrounded by all my piles of things to do.

Is everyone tracking the Amazon/Booksurge flap? The uproar that hit shortly before the PSWA conference has subsided and chat lines have, for the most part, turned to other subjects, but the situation remains a serious concern for all of us in the publishing industry, writers and publishers and even other retailers. In the event you didn’t catch this news, Amazon has made a decision to insist that all Print On Demand books be printed at their inhouse shop, Booksurge. Those who refuse are having their “SELL” buttons removed from the Amazon site.

What this means is that, although your cover and description and reviews and whatever are still displayed, there is no way for an Amazon shopper to buy your book via Amazon. You can, of course, list it for sale via Amazon Marketplace, but the book won’t ship via Amazon and therefore, won’t figure into any shipping deals or any special offers coming from Amazon.

Are some parties thinking “Sue the bastards!”…yes, to be sure. There are a number of individual suits and one class action suit that I have heard of.  Plus, when Amazon put the squeeze on publishers in the UK, they received a powerful blowback. It will be interesting to see how this shakes out.

It was exciting to debut two new titles at the PSWA conference: Bob Cohen’s 2-volume collection SCURVY DOGS, GREEN WATER and GUNSMOKE: Fifty Years in US Navy Destroyers and Mary Montague Sikes’ latest entry into her Passenger to Paradise series, SECRETS By The SEA.

And for any PSWAers with a ready-to-go manuscript, consider the COPTALES contest…the book I debut at the 2009 conference could be yours!

Billie Johnson, Publisher
Oak Tree Press

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The Pitfalls of Being Published by a Do-it-Yourself Publisher or Small Press

A small press is an independent publisher like Oak Tree Press. I’m published with a small press that I love. Though Oak Tree and my publisher meet some of the Mystery Writers of America criteria for an approved publisher, neither one meet them all. The reason MWA came up with the list of approved publishers is because of the do-it-yourself publisher.

What I’m calling a do-it-yourself publisher is the many online publishers such as iUniverse, Publish America, Lulu.com, etc.. These publishers use the print-on-demand technology to print the books, giving choices as to layout etc., put ISBN numbers on your books etc. There are some wonderful books published by these outfits-but there are far more that aren’t so good.

Some of these publishers do offer editorial services if you’re willing to pay for them. Unfortunately, not enough authors take advantage of these services—or have another editor go over their work.

Because of the ease of getting published today by this type of publisher, the market is glutted with books that aren’t as good as they could be.

This has hurt these authors and authors who are published by other small, independent publishers who use the print-on-demand publishers. If you are one of these authors and have tried to do a book signing in a regular bookstore, you may have already faced this problem.

This is part of the MWA criteria for approved publishers:

  • You have been paid at least $1,000 in advances, royalties, or a combination of advances and royalties. Your publisher, to be approved, must have paid a minimum of $1,000 during the preceding year to at least five authors with no financial or ownership interest in the company.

  • If you write short stories, your cumulative earnings are at least $200, with only payments of at least $25 counting toward the total. Scholarly articles or chapters of nonfiction books will be treated like short stories for purposes of Active Category qualification. . Payment must be in monies, not in barter for advertising or copies.

  • The initial print run for a book-length work of fiction or nonfiction must be at least 500 copies.

  • Your publisher must have been in business for at least two years since publication of the first        book by a person with no financial or ownership interest in the company. (Exception: a new imprint by an established publisher.)

  • Your publisher, within the past five years, may not have charged a fee to consider, read, submit, or comment on manuscripts; nor may the publisher, or any of the executives or editors under its employ, have offered you or any other authors self-publishing services, literary representation, paid editorial services, or paid promotional services.

  • Your publisher, to be approved, must publish at least five authors per year, other than those with a financial or ownership interest in the company, such as an owner, business partner, employee, or close relative of such person.

  • Your work is professionally published or produced and is not self-published or cooperatively published.

  • Among (but not all of) the situations defined as "self-published or cooperatively published" are works by those who have paid all or part of the cost of publication or distribution of the work; works printed and bound by a company that does not place the work in physical (aka brick-and-mortar) bookstores; those works for which the authors were required by the publisher to pay any monies whatsoever before or during publication; those published by "cooperative" publishing or others which require authors to pay for marketing; those published by privately held publishing companies with whom the writer has a familial or personal relationship beyond simply author and publisher; those published by companies or imprints that do not publish other authors; those published by publishing companies in which the writer has a financial interest.

  • A reputable, professional publisher works with agents or other authors' representatives; the publisher is listed in the Literary Marketplace or belongs to professional publishing associations; the publisher pays for editing, copyediting, design, cover art, production, advertising, marketing, distribution, and all other aspects of publication. They do not require authors to pay for any of the above.

Many of the major mystery conventions have decided to use the list of approved publishers as the criteria as to which authors can appear on panels at the conventions. Some are using similar or adjusted rules. (PSWA does not use these or any rules to prevent an author from being on a panel.)

One thing authors need to understand is print-on-demand is a merely a printing technology. All it means is that the book is stored electronically until more copies are needed. Even the big New York publishers are using print-on-demand technology for some of their trade paperbacks. (A trade paperback is a soft cover book that is the size of a hard back book. Should be cheaper than a hard back. This is another problem with some of the publishers who charge far too much for a trade paperback, making them difficult to sell.) Print on demand also means that books aren’t returned and thrown in a dump to be destroyed.

My publishers all use print-on-demand technology. No, they aren’t on the MWA approved publisher list because they don’t meet all of the criteria. They don’t pay advances, they do pay royalties—and most importantly, my manuscripts are edited before they are published. But guess what, folks, I now pay someone to edit them before I send them to my publisher. Why? Because I know that mistakes get by if they aren’t seen by another set of eyes than the author’s. Also, as the judge of many contests, I’ve seen too many errors that could have been corrected by a good editor.

For the next newsletter, I’ll write about common errors authors often make.

--Marilyn Meredith
http://fictionforyou.com

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Request for Short Stories by Member Tony Burton

Wolfmont Press and Tony Burton have announced the call for submissions for their third anthology to benefit the Toys for Tots.  In 2006, Wolfmont pulled together their first anthology (BY THE CHIMNEY WITH CARE) of Christmas-themed crime stories in sort of a rush, as a last-minute idea, and still was able to raise $1,365 for the Toys for Tots Foundation.

Last year, with a little more planning, the second anthology, titled CAROLS AND CRIMES, GIFTS AND GRIFTERS, managed to raise $2,000 for the kids.  Both anthologies have received great reviews, and of course the greatest thing is that the purchasers got superb collections of short crime stories while at the same time helping out needy kids.
           
Some of the authors who have contributed to these last two anthologies are: Sue Ann Jaffarian, John M. Floyd, Jeffrey Marks, Thomas Cook, Frank Zafiro, O’Neil De Noux, Chris Grabenstein, and Austin Camacho.  All together, thirty-one authors contributed stories to those two anthologies, some famous and some not-yet-famous.
           
The publisher, Wolfmont Press, donated all profits from the previous two anthologies to the Toys for Tots Foundation. This year’s book will be the same.
           
The third anthology is to be titled DYING IN A WINTER WONDERLAND, and is scheduled for release on October 1, 2008.  Submissions are still being accepted up through July 15, but potential contributors should read the guidelines on the Wolfmont Press web site.  They are found at http://www.wolfmont.com/Wonderland/wonderland_call.htm
           
I believe this year’s effort will be the best yet, and I’m hoping to bring our contribution this year up to $2,500, even more if possible. Check out the reviews for the last two anthologies on the Wolfmont web site, and on the page for last year’s anthology, you can even read some of the stories from the book.
           
Why the Toys for Tots?  When I was a kid, we were not in any way financially well-off.  In fact, for a couple of years disaster seemed to strike all too frequently.  When I was five years old our house burned to the ground with all our possessions; within a year we were involved in a wreck which totaled our car and put the entire family in the hospital for weeks. My father was unable to work for some time because of a back injury.  I didn’t know it at the time, but for about three years, Christmas for me was because of tremendous sacrifices on my parents’ part as well as the kindness of others. I hate the thought of any child waking up without something special waiting for him or her.
           
Again, if you are interested in being a contributor to this anthology with a crime story based any of the usual wintertime holidays (Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa), check out the guidelines on the Wolfmont Press web site.  Reading the example stories from last year’s anthology may give you an idea of what we are looking for.  Of course, if you just want to purchase a great holiday gift for your reading friends this year, hang on and we’ll have one of the best anthologies you could find and you’ll be doing something great for kids, too.

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Knight Stick Magazine

Knight Stick Magazine is published twice yearly by McKnight Company, Falmouth, MA. Knight Stick is the official publication of the NH Police Association (aka NHPA). The NHPA is open to all full & part time certified police officers in NH (local, state & county).We currently have approximately 3,000 + members.

We try to feature material from within the State of New Hampshire and also reprint germane articles from new media sources and groups such as yourselves.

Should you have an interest in submitting articles for publication in Knight Stick we would be happy to add them to our magazine on occasion.

Our deadlines for submission are September 15 (Fall Edition) & February 15 for (Spring Edition). All articles can be directly forwarded to Blanche Cody blanche@mcknightcompany.com Cc... to myself kplaisted@nhpd.org. Submissions should be on disc to include authors photo & bio-sketch. All photos should have appropriate captions.

Please feel free to contact me at my e-mail address with any questions.

-- Kerry Plaisted, Editor, Knight Stick Magazine

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MEMBER BOOK REVIEWS

One of the joys of attending and participating in each PSWA annual conference is the opportunity to talk with our members who have been working on individual writing projects and who have the pleasure of introducing them at the event. This year was no exception.

Sarah Cortez has labored for over four (4) years to assemble and edit an inspiring collection of essays written by young Latinos. "Windows Into My World", published by Pinata Books, an imprint of Arte Publico Press, from the University of Houston, ISBN 978-1-55885-482-6, was introduced to us when Sarah did her one minute "elevator speech" at the beginning of the conference.

The speech was designed to capture your attention and motivate you to follow-up on the information. It worked perfectly. I immediately grabbed a copy of the book and during the  breaks in the conference and before retiring each night, I squeezed in a couple of stories.

Before the conference was over, I became Sarah's sales person and directed those in attendance to visit the book sale area, purchase a copy and have Sarah inscribe it while she was with us. This book is great!

As the young writers wrote each of their individual stories, I began to see faces that appear each semester in my classes at Monterey Peninsula College (MPC) in California.  The rosters that I am given at the beginning of each semester echo many of the surnames that I saw in the book.

As an Anglo, born and raised in southern California, I thought I knew a lot about the Latino heritage, but I was mistaken. While reading through each story, I began to see and understand much more clearly how difficult it is for my minority students to leave their families; enroll in college classes; maintain their grades; work part or full time; and hope to graduate/transfer to a four year college. I am much better informed and able to empathize with each of them now that I have read and digested "Windows Into My World".

I am grateful that Sarah undertook and completed such an ambitious and important project.
She should be congratulated for the accomplishment.

--Arthur James "A.J." Farrar, M.S.
 http://www.policewriter.com/Members/ajfarrar.htm
ajfarrar@policewriter.com

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"From the early 1970's through the early 1980's, Mike Berish and I worked obscenity vice cases in the City of Miami where Mike was first a Patrolman and later a Sergeant.  He was the consummate 'cop'; none better.  He lived the stories he relates in 'Reflections from the Pit,' and it is a wonder he was not himself a fatality or at least seriously damaged. 

"This book reflects the very 'soul' of honesty as well as the constant corruption involved in working as a beat officer."

Bill Kelly
Special Agent (Retired)
Federal Bureau of Investigation
Miami, Fl.

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"Mike Berish's stories in his REFLECTIONS FROM THE PIT stun you by their portrayal of the daily perils a cop faces as he confronts danger, deceit, and distrust in upholding the law in Miami.

"Mike spent twenty-two years on the city's police force.  His book's powerful fiction vividly illustrates the corruption and fury endlessly stewing in the Pit.  It's relentless intensity possesses an authenticity, honesty, and directness that obliterates shallow TV shows."   

Syd Bradford
Editor and Publisher of
Enigma Magazine
Philadelphia, PA

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Loved it!  Roller Coaster Ride!

"I have read other great stories by Michael Berish and it was a treat to read this book. This is not just another cops & robbers book; rather, this book, REFLECTIONS FROM THE PIT, is a great collection of the most unusual, weirdest stories about both the cops in Miami and the characters & criminals they meet and deal with on the street.

"His uncanny and witty remarks, and his piercing penetrating defiant look at police work and human nature, make reading this book (which is filled with high octane action) an unforgettable adventure.  You'll experience a kaleidoscope of emotions that range from the heart-felt to the sublimely incredulous!  These stories are truly snapshots into the dark side of police work.  It'll an exceptional read and hard to put down, but when you finish, you will say to yourself: 'I never knew people like that, including the cops, ever existed.' 

"I found a link to some of his other short stories at the bottom of his Home Page on his website at:  www.realmiamivice.com"

Magda Amo , Marketing Consultant

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Just finished BLINDED BY DARKNESS by Tony Burton.   I loved following the chain of increasingly serious crimes in this novel through the eyes of the protagonist, Reverend Thomas Wilson.   

Beginning with what seems like a rather humorous prank (though it ends up making many in Reverend Wilson's congregation ill) the seriousness of attacks on his church and its members increase until one member dies in an . . . accident?, and Thomas and his wife Amy are threatened.

The church is hoping to build a new edifice to accommodate its growing membership, and roadblocks to the plans come, one after another.   

Are the pranks just that?  Was the accident murder?   Is any of this related to the church's expansion plans?  A reluctant Reverend has suspicions but, at first, can't get the police to take things seriously.   (They find the first prank sadly humorous, as I did.)

The plot is full of suspense and puzzles that keep the mind fully engaged. Characters Thomas Wilson,  Amy, and all members of the congregation and community who have speaking roles in this story come alive and seem very real.   

Burton skillfully creates several characters who aren't who they seem to be (both good and bad), and this increases the interest and suspense.  Danger to Thomas himself grows exponentially until the reader wonders if he's going to come out of this alive!

And no, the book is not at all preachy!   Being a pastor is simply Thomas Wilson's job description and he's very good at his job.

I hope to follow the Reverend Wilson Mysteries for a long time.

Reviewed by Radine Trees Nehring on DorothyL http://www.RadinesBooks.com

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http://www.americanauthorsassociation.com/
AAA Book Review

Smell of Death
Author: F. M. Meredith a.k.a. Marilyn Meredith
Publisher: Tigress Press
Reviewer: Jeff Edwards

Smell of Death is a tightly woven tapestry of romance, human tragedy, and murder.

Officer Stacey Wilbur has problems. As a single parent and the only female officer assigned to the Rocky Bluff Police Department, her life is quite complicated enough. When she suddenly finds herself dealing with two murders, a kidnapped child, and a pair of clumsy burglars, things begin to get out of control. Somewhere in the middle of all of that, she’s beginning to fall for one of the detectives in her squad.

Author F. M. Meredith has been compared to Joseph Wambaugh, and I can definitely see the connection. The cops of her fictional Rocky Bluff PD have lives that extend beyond the chase and the crime scene. They struggle to raise their children, deal with leaky faucets, and pay their mortgages. They have hopes, loves, fears, and nightmares. They come across like real people, with real lives.

The police work in Smell of Death is not fancy, or even particularly high-tech. There’s no CSI magic to be found here. There are no courtroom theatrics, and no hyper-intuitive detectives. Just hard working cops doing the sort of methodical spadework that probably solves most real life crimes.

Fans of Hill Street Blues will find this book right up their alley. F. M. Meredith has crafted a smoothly compelling police drama, peopled by convincing characters.

Marilyn’s website: http://fictionforyou.com

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MEMBER NEWS

Denny Griffin reports that in addition to The Battle for Las Vegas and Cullotta, for which Books In Motion has contracted with Huntington Press to produce as audio books, I have entered into a contract with BIM for three of my fictions. They are going to do my Vegas-based trilogy, Killer In Pair-A-Dice, One-Armed Bandit, and Vegas Vixen.
 
Way to go, Denny!

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FYI...the newest issue of LawOfficer.com (edited by member Tim Dees) eNewsletter that you might have heard about at our last conference is now available. http://www.LawOfficer.com

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"Windows into My World: Latino Youth Write Their Lives", the book Sarah Cortez assembled and edited, has been awarded the prestigious 2008 Skipping Stones Honor Award as an exceptional book and teaching resource, encouraging an understanding of the world's diverse cultures. Congratulations, Sarah. Those of us who purchased this book at the PSWA conference, know why this book has been winning literary prizes.

(Anyone who would like to be interviewed for the newsletter, just contact the editor at mmeredith@ocsnet.net)

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